Sharing a umbrella Art Share

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Sharing a umbrella

At work decided to do a quick sketch with Natalie and Lilly sharing a umbrella in a rainstorm. Any feedback back would be appreciated 

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Skelly • 1 hour ago
This is a really charming composition! The umbrella creates a nice frame around the characters and immediately tells the story. Their expressions feel warm and natural, and even as a quick sketch the interaction between them comes across clearly. I'd maybe push the overlap and closeness a little more to emphasize them sharing the small space under the umbrella, but it's already very appealing
Ramules • 1 hour ago
Oh yeahbi can over lap them little more having Natalie take up more space in front of Lilly good idea I might add a splash of color to this thank you!
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